GrandmasterJ's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vampire Hunter INA]

Sweet!

Very nicely done. The drawings were for the most part excellent, but some of the animations were kinda crappy. You should've had a higher framerate on the gunfire. The story looks really nice, and I look forward to a sequel. Keep up the good work.

ImageNation responds:

yeah we thought about the frame rate but old comeputers have problems the higher the frame rate you go so we wanted to keep them in mind.

[Exploding Fungus (silent)]

Trippy

Work at it. You could probably make some Untitled type stuff.

Bezman responds:

Thanks a lot.

I shall try, however, to not make some stuff which resembles another series, no matter how nice it is.

Hopefully, after a while, people will come to recognise my style and accept the fact that I have some all-rightish ideas. :)

[Experience Points Guide]

Pretty cool

A nice, original idea. I was a little hurt that you didn't list me though....*sniff*

Splent responds:

Thanks. I'm sorry I didn't include you, but raspberryclock asked first, and I can't not include Tom Fulp in there at Level 10. Otherwise I would have. I wish I could list everyone!

[CC:TM]

Yeah thats right. An 8.

I think everyone who gave this a zero is simply biased against the clock crew. This was in fact, a much better movie than I usually see on the portal. Good job, Raspberry.

RaspberryClock responds:

Wow, thanks!

[4 legs]

bleh.

Looks like you just got bored and were fooling around with some sprites. If you want to make sprite movies, you need a full set for each character. That means either finding a sprite sheet and ripping it up, finding a site with a set of clear sprites, or if all else fails, rip them straight from the game. If you want some ideas, look at my stuff. Just don't copy me though. If you really need help finding sprites, I can send you some. And, to restate, your text needs to slow down a lot. At least 40 frames of clearance. I'd be glad to help you if you need it.

PPMan responds:

yor movies rule but i might do every one a favor a quit all my movies suck any way

[Mario does something]

yep, that was pretty bad.

hmmm, by my count, 2 sound fx, 1 music clip, really bad joke about the difference in size of the mario sprite and the sonic sprite, no backround to speak of, very............strange death of mario, little or no storyline, that about sums up this movie. This is what happens when a really bored teenager finds some sprites on the net. I should know..........

super0sonic responds:

ya thats all about right but not the last part i use sprites becuse i can't draw worth a shit i also like your flash

[street fighter]

not bad

Very short though, and lacked a preloader. Looked very nice. Try again, and make it a lot longer next time.

deepee responds:

lacked a preloader?! who givez a care! i dun need no stinkin' preloader! wat duh hell

[Frog Gets Robbed!]

wow, not bad!

A few tips. Work on your sprite ripping, there was a very noticeable flaw in the loading animation. Also, sometime during the movie, the backround moved, fix that. And make the text a little bigger and in a clearer font. It was a little hard to read. Otherwise, very nice!

Hobbitron responds:

Thanks, all those things I noticed, and when I tried to find the problem of why the background moved when frog was waking up, I didn't see the BG move. =/
Quite strange indeed. I am trying to find why it does that in the actual movie but not in the editing part. But thanks for your comments! =P

[Rico vs. Hiri]

not bad!

Not bad at all. If I were you, I'd work on this movie some more, and re-release it with possibly more fighting, a slower framerate, and a lot more color. It was a little hard to distinguish who was who. Definitely slow down the framerate though, people won't be able to see your hard work if its going too fast. I could catch some of it, and the animation looked pretty good. If I can get one of my crappy movies on the top 20 of the week, then you can get this there, too. Put some more time into it. It will be great.

WetFart responds:

thanx for the advice

[Megaman Turns The Tables]

quite good.

Overall, It was funny and you made a good use of 8 bit sprites. Although, the part where he was humping the faces of the robot masters was a bit long, and you couldve made his eyebrows move up and down when he was in the saucer. (See what I just did? I just gave you a peice of constructive criticism. Instead of just saying "Oh my god your a fucking moron gay faggot peice of shit bastard fuck turdmonger stupid dumbass", I gave you suggestions on how to make your next movie better. Doesnt that blow your mind? Try it sometime.[Yes, I'm being bitter because of your bad review of my crappy movie. Oh well.])

Drug-SeX responds:

Well i'm didn't give you any constructive critisism becuz it's obvious your poor with flash. I'm sorry if I went a little hard on your movie but it was crappy :) hehe